Here is the full list of all 9 What Remains of Edith Finch achievements. It takes around 2-3 hours to unlock all of the achievements on Windows.
Finish all stories
Look in all peepholes and telescopes long enough to hear Edith's commentary
Take both paths to the house
Catch 2 rabbits with only 2 swoops
Let the drunken sailor finish his song
Clear all balls off the pool table
Knock all the letters of Gregory's name into the bathtub
See Johann's name in the ending credits
Play Calvin's story again